Hello there I have written a reflection on how I wrote my research paper, "Should women in america have an equal pay standard". I had selected a few annotations which I tried to gather up as much information from Micheal Moore's film, "where to Invade next" Iceland,is a country that is the most feminist country in the world because Iceland wants gender equality for both sex's. At the moment it is at 18% in the wage gap(Kvenrettindafelag). There is still a gender gap in many counties including America so I wanted to find out why America still had a wage gap?
Who did you work with to compose your research paper? Was this a good approach? I read various sources to get a sense of that America and Iceland need help with in the gender equality values a balance on gender equality. I thing the citations are very reliable because it is up to date with all the relative statistics and the tutoring lab would also help me out with the editing. Then I would ask my teacher Mr. Mangini for help in the write ups to make sure he understood what was going on. Afterward he would give me feedback for me to revision. I wanted to make sure that I also quoted the the sources so they could get credit for their work. What rhetorical mode and genre are you using? The rhetorical made is to persuade, I wanted to really inform my reader of the biases that lead to the unequal pay wages of the societies. America in reference to Iceland had a few similarities but there were small changes that Iceland did from watching American protest. Over all I believe that women in America are not voicing out there opinions in unison as much as the Icelandic women. Then I want to persuade Americans to change a few scheme's to make the earning of women if not equal then less polar. I think America can be a feminist country but the top American man do not want it that way. When did you write this project?Good approach Good approach?I wrote the project the week after 4/20. I first wanted to find out what I wanted to do. So I looked at the arguments I had mad up while watching "where to Invade Next by Micheal Moore.when I found the topic I was looking for my research paper I had to do more reading to understand the topic before I started to write the information. I had to figure out what is causing the bias earning income for women to men in America. I think at the end to me it is understandable so I also want it to be easily digested. I would use some of the hyperlinks that Sabatino had provided for us so that I could look up some examples. Where did you write this project? Good approach? I wrote the research paper whenever I thought about ideas for writing the paper. I tried to find articles that would benefit the need for women to protest the workforce to get better wages in America. I think it was a good approach because I was taking as much time as I had to find sources and articles that would benefit my topic. Why did you choose to write about your chosen topic? Good choice I choose to write about women in America having an equal pay standard. I think it is very important because women have been stereotyped to be a house wife and women do not like the to be submissive to men. Women want to be in the competitive environments as men, but even when women are working at the same level as men they were still stigmas that left women in a glass ceiling. I wanted to figure out why those women are still earning less than they deserve and how could America fix it. My Choice went well, I was able to find resources that caused the polarity between the gender gap. there are also inconsistencies in the American culture that lead to a role strain in working mothers. How did it feel to write this argument When I was writing the research paper, I was looking at a few sources that I cited on the paper because I was looking at the information that I could find. It was a very informative essays from multiple sources on how the American and Icelandic society women would earn their wages in a fight for gender equality and the wage gap. I felt very smart researching this idea because it was a passion that made me want to know more and more about the subject because it is so relevant in today's economy. I hope I can continue to do researches in my adult life to truly get a sense of what the societies are going through in their culture. How will you revise your argument? To revise my work I will try to get more voices into my work because I really want to reinvent the paper so it is more readable and very direct. I hope to not dilute the topic because I did not specify the argument clearly. I want to form a structured argument but still make my thesis dominant. The information provided which can answer the rhetorical question and not to let others think in a was that is not similar to my information. I want to answer the rhetorical questions with no space for individual prejudiced.
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