Hello there I have written a reflection on how I wrote my research paper, "Should women in america have an equal pay standard". I had selected a few annotations which I tried to gather up as much information from Micheal Moore's film, "where to Invade next" Iceland,is a country that is the most feminist country in the world because Iceland wants gender equality for both sex's. At the moment it is at 18% in the wage gap(Kvenrettindafelag). There is still a gender gap in many counties including America so I wanted to find out why America still had a wage gap?
Who did you work with to compose your research paper? Was this a good approach? I read various sources to get a sense of that America and Iceland need help with in the gender equality values a balance on gender equality. I thing the citations are very reliable because it is up to date with all the relative statistics and the tutoring lab would also help me out with the editing. Then I would ask my teacher Mr. Mangini for help in the write ups to make sure he understood what was going on. Afterward he would give me feedback for me to revision. I wanted to make sure that I also quoted the the sources so they could get credit for their work. What rhetorical mode and genre are you using? The rhetorical made is to persuade, I wanted to really inform my reader of the biases that lead to the unequal pay wages of the societies. America in reference to Iceland had a few similarities but there were small changes that Iceland did from watching American protest. Over all I believe that women in America are not voicing out there opinions in unison as much as the Icelandic women. Then I want to persuade Americans to change a few scheme's to make the earning of women if not equal then less polar. I think America can be a feminist country but the top American man do not want it that way. When did you write this project?Good approach Good approach?I wrote the project the week after 4/20. I first wanted to find out what I wanted to do. So I looked at the arguments I had mad up while watching "where to Invade Next by Micheal Moore.when I found the topic I was looking for my research paper I had to do more reading to understand the topic before I started to write the information. I had to figure out what is causing the bias earning income for women to men in America. I think at the end to me it is understandable so I also want it to be easily digested. I would use some of the hyperlinks that Sabatino had provided for us so that I could look up some examples. Where did you write this project? Good approach? I wrote the research paper whenever I thought about ideas for writing the paper. I tried to find articles that would benefit the need for women to protest the workforce to get better wages in America. I think it was a good approach because I was taking as much time as I had to find sources and articles that would benefit my topic. Why did you choose to write about your chosen topic? Good choice I choose to write about women in America having an equal pay standard. I think it is very important because women have been stereotyped to be a house wife and women do not like the to be submissive to men. Women want to be in the competitive environments as men, but even when women are working at the same level as men they were still stigmas that left women in a glass ceiling. I wanted to figure out why those women are still earning less than they deserve and how could America fix it. My Choice went well, I was able to find resources that caused the polarity between the gender gap. there are also inconsistencies in the American culture that lead to a role strain in working mothers. How did it feel to write this argument When I was writing the research paper, I was looking at a few sources that I cited on the paper because I was looking at the information that I could find. It was a very informative essays from multiple sources on how the American and Icelandic society women would earn their wages in a fight for gender equality and the wage gap. I felt very smart researching this idea because it was a passion that made me want to know more and more about the subject because it is so relevant in today's economy. I hope I can continue to do researches in my adult life to truly get a sense of what the societies are going through in their culture. How will you revise your argument? To revise my work I will try to get more voices into my work because I really want to reinvent the paper so it is more readable and very direct. I hope to not dilute the topic because I did not specify the argument clearly. I want to form a structured argument but still make my thesis dominant. The information provided which can answer the rhetorical question and not to let others think in a was that is not similar to my information. I want to answer the rhetorical questions with no space for individual prejudiced.
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Blau, Et al. “Gender Wage Gap:Extent, Trends, and explanations.” NBER, University of Chicago Press,www.nber.org/paper/w21913
Churchill, Lindsey Blake. “The Feminine Mystique,” Encyclopedia Britannica.com/topic/ The-Feminine- Mystique.
Iwpr.org/publication/gender-wage-gap-occupation-2017-race-ethnicity
Johnson,Janet Elise, “the most Feminist Place in the World”. The Nation, 29 June 2015 WWW.Thenation.com/article/most-Feminist-Place-World.
Kvenrettindafelag island, “Looking for information about equal pay in Iceland? All about the equal pay standard.” Kvenrettindafelag island, 4 Jan.2018/ looking-for-information-about-equal-pay-in-iceland-all-about-equal-pay-standard/. The process of implementing the Equal Pay Standard act
"Micheal Moore "Where to Invade Next."
“A Film by Michael Moore » WHERE TO INVADE NEXT.” WHERE TO INVADE NEXT, wheretoinvadenext.com/.
http://wheretoinvadenext.com/
I where to invade next is a movie of how a United States citizen wants to know what is making the economy in certain counties different that the united states of America. they decided to hire a representative that would step in as a United States representative to study those counties devices without bringing attention to the fact that the American government was gathering report from them.
Does a well balance lunch honestly matter in an educational system? Yes it does, if a school only served fast food or chips for lunch it would lead to malnutrition and low energy in the students that are in that education system. Without a healthy nutrition the students would not listen to the teacher. an argument is that the ability to feed the children is already nutrition because the children are not starving while they are in class, even though the the food choices are not at the health standard there are a lot of children that still benefit from simply receiving food. 2 The ability for a country to have a fair trail, the sentences all have to be mutual to every prisoner. In Norway there is a limitation on how many years one have to serve there punishment, in jail. The longest year being 21 years,(Micheal Moore) all the criminals were charged using the same method and these prisoners would not be charged longer than the expected year. should the prisoners in the prison system be given a structure of years they can serve their prison sentence? I think they should because it is showing equality through the judgment process, the even sentence distribution shows that the prisoner is not being shown cruel and unusual punishment or serve longer sentences than required maybe to let the prisoners repent for their crimes. Argument: The prisoners do not have any right to find equality in a structured prison sentence. Since the prisoner made a deviant act, that act has to be punished in its own method because the court is forcing judgment on the convict for the deviance it had in their country. Many of the prisoners if made submissive could have the ability to understand right from wrong because of the sanctions they had received while they are in jail. America should also leave the judgment in categories because it splits off those who are in jail for minimal crimes like not paying for their speeding ticket, to those who need more time like murders. 3. In Tunisia's civil rights protest the women had to have a voice in their countries parlement so they would show up at the supreme court protesting and showing their stance for womens rights. The protest rised the interest of the women vote that the government wanted women to receive their right to vote and work in parliament. Should women be paid the same pay wage as the man in their work area. women are really trying to find their voice in the work force by working the same amount of hours as men but in the American culture white men seem to still get the bulk of the encome women should be able to receive the same amount income because the ability to work in the same quality as a men. Argument: If women were able to earn the same amount of wages as a white men the American economy would grow exponentially. There would be inflation in the goods because those who have the ability to work, are working. the Inflation will make it even harder for those who are below the poverty line to afford anything to eat. Those who were not able to find a job might be jobless because of all the positions being more competitive between both genders.. An argument I made in from what I gathered from Where to Invade Next is, " should one country have a separation of church and state. in the Article there was the Tanisha who wanted the women voice to be considered in their culture the women decided they needed better social stability apart from religious stratification in the context of the Muslim ideal. In the share of political power women in Tunisia would have a voice to make them feel safe. before this time the women would not feel safe in their country because the country was contanly making laws that would benefit a man and not a woman. I think the reason women received their oppression with protest. They would be able to show how endurance of a negative interacting could have long term benefits and that is by coming together and forcing the governmnet to watch them and help make america grow from these innovative idea. |
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